So this is probably just a dumb idea. Any thoughts would be nice. Let me know.

Add some neon colours or something.

where, though?

Oh, inside the large text itself.

anything else?

Hmmmm, I'd say make one of the THANK YOUs into some sort of neon coler, and leave the rest how they are. Maybe try that? Colorize the bottom THANK YOU. Thats what I'd try out.

Also, just thought, make them sequenced colors some sort, in a downward pattern.

http://www.printfection.com/jointchiefs/THANK-YOU-THANK-YOU-THANK-YOU/_s_157884



This is what the colors used to be... The grocery bag executives have since switched styles, but a color scheme similar to this (as far as darkest color in middle) might help the design out a bit. Also, I believe the have a nice day, is in cursive on the real bags.



Funny design though...

When the idea is great, the art can be simple. Not sure this is strong enough for such a plain shirt. Try a different font maybe and if you got a little bit of skills the right character could really make it all happen. Right now, it's a little too vanilla.

also

Critique mine please

I like this a lot. I think it IS strong enough as is, but that might be just me... I worry that the neon might take away from it.



http://www.threadless.com/critique/18181/Six_Monkeys

its exactly how a bag that i referenced looked. I know there are the white bags with red, but maybe there can be two color options?