\"Last Night\" for me is like a comlex way of simlicity wich i tried to represent it with mixture of words and illusration, i wanted to give the feeling of movment with record (disk) fusion and words game like DISCONFUSION, DISK ON FUSION, DISCO FUSION. And th bird is like metaphorical way of simplification of complexity and tranform it to music.

I really like this. especially the bird. It took me a minute to see what it said :)

This is so cute! I would wear it in a sec. In terms of color, I'm torn but I think I prefer the white shirt. Good luck :)

nice design but a little hard to read. as an abstract design its engaging, esp like the kinetic bounce the lines create.

very hard to read, I still haven't figured it out

but I would say submit just on the grounds that it's a kick ass illustration!

Nice letters.

Is there a reason why the second i is facing the opposite direction? It threw me at first--i thought it was a different letter.



The bird has a 60s hippy style, though, not a 70s disco style. The record-esque letters allude to music, so I'm not sure the bird is needed at all, but it is a nice illustration.



I'd save the bird for another project and concentrate on working with the letters for this.

very sexi good luck with it

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http://www.threadless.com/critique/34641/king_cock

i like this.... in black.... the text is a bit hard to see... i never would have gotten it without the text at the top... It's visually nice though

yah I also like the black one. nice!!



need your suggestions. Thanks

Very cool.



http://www.threadless.com/critique/38309/Don_t_cross_the_streams

i like this very much :)
i have a question^^ what tipps can you give me, that i get a shirt printed, cause i've seen you got it so many times^^
are you a design or arts studen?

thanks for replying
Jan