this has been previously submitted by myself but I have since then redone the submission based on feedback.



what do you guys think now? the main things ive done is tweak the carousel to make it less \"prison-y\" changed the colors to more bright (and dark) ones, and made the trashcan more detailed.



also, the stink cluoud is make out of dark stars, if you cant see it.

please critique!

this is so much better than the other one.. i like those colors... i like it

nice work

i would place the remaining pink thingy on the horses leg



check out mine

http://www.threadless.com/critique/19764/Blown_Away

ekegt, i dont know what you mean by i would place the remaining pink thingy on the horses leg



thanks brujis!

do you mean the tail?

no i meant the hoof.. or that thing.. notice how 3 legs have it.. and one is hoofless



http://www.threadless.com/critique/19764/Blown_Away

need some critiquage going on. please comment.

oh, thats because that arm (or leg) is in the actual trashcan so you arent supposed to see it.

nice concept, but the leg bugs me, i would just give it a pink hoof. how do u see it on a tee? and i would add a third layer of the theme park just to give yourself some more background.



http://www.threadless.com/critique/19799/Hot_Stuff

thanks domo, adding a third layer sounds like a good idea, im just worried that it will take away from the focusing theme. ill work on the leg to make it work better too. thanks a lot.

different color options and worked on the leg and hoof based on comments.



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what do you guys think?

what colors do you guys prefer? im actually leaning towards the pink version myself.

please comment before i submit!

Nice work! There´s still something about the right front leg - it looks "balloonish" (is that a word?) to me, and maybe the neck is too short...

By the way... Pink version, no doubt :-)

thanks freehand for your feedback, do you think the right arm needs to be skinnier?

The right arm looks a little rubbery. I think a little bone structure is all you need.

thanks so much amykollaranderson, i agree completely and ill work on it for the next version.

I like the pink version of this much better.

i agree. thanks for the feedback.

bump!

Dude I love it!

Cool Man

cool i like it! :)

thanks guys! should i go ahead and submit?

bump!

Submit 5$.

haha, so funny! You might want to try adding a shadow underneath the horse and garbage can, but other then that I say submit.

also you might want to submit this design fresh so you can experiment and find a more enticing thumbnail image?

Perhaps it's just me, but the x for the eye gives the wrong impression. I always associate that with death, not nausea or explosive vomiting.

yeah, you are right, definitely going to get a new thumbnail. just sort of threw that one on there.



ill try adding the shadow to see how it looks. thanks to everyone! please more comments!

bump!

comment before i submit!!!!

the way the horse is impaled seems a little weird. I don't know of anything you could do to fix this though.

Great work , looks awesome...Printable for sure...



Please comment on mine if you can...



http://www.threadless.com/critique/19985/In_Da_Hood

this is awesome! The trashcan needs some work..lose the bevel and emboss filter

I think it would look a little better if you worked on the pole going through the horse a little more. Maybe show the actual parts where it's going in so it doesn't look so 2-dimensional. Also a little reflection on it would look great. The cloud coming out of the can is a little funny shaped, maybe make it a little more curvey. Looks great though, I'm sure it will get a good score.



Feedback appreciaed...

http://www.threadless.com/critique/19832/Untitled_Heart_Project

i see what you guys mean about the pole, ill definitely work on that!

thanks so much for all the feedback!



more is greatly appreciated!

so funny! Sub it!
And I need your comment, too.