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I like it a lot, my only suggestion is maybe adding in a second shade of red to add some definition to different parts?
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Ste7en on Apr 13 '07 perhaps. anyone else?
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Ste7en on Apr 13 '07 anyone at all?
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I really like this but i agree maybe a second shade of red or something as everything blends together a bit too much so it's hard to figure out what each part of the image is exactly without studying it
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It's really cool looking, but unless someone looks closely it is just a bunch of splotches. Remember, this is a shirt design. Who would want to wear it if everyone stared at it for 5 minutes to decide what it was from a distance of approximately 5 inches away?
I'm thinking you need to use more negative space. You have saturated it with positive-space elements: throw in something taking advantage of all the negative space. Perhaps a central design... |
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I hate having to be critical but I don't like the distressed woman who appears to be bleeding, and shown for no other reason than that blood is red, that seems to me to be a pretty weak and lame reason for showing some one suffering. I do realise this is just a t-shirt design but this may put some people off
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All free hand, no tracing, and the only image that I used a reference picture for was the fish, but hes not identical so it doesnt really matter. Tried to avoid cliches, so if you look closely at things you'll notice I added odd details or unsettling little touches to make it something different (think cardinal with squid coming out of his mouth).
Let me know what you guys and gals think.