I was considering having the red lines flowing behind the skeletal system highlighted through UV inks, though I don't know how to indicate that...

Wow very nice/clean design

I had also wanted to make a "back," but I'm not very clear on whether that's allowed. There is a template for it, but I've never seen any front/back prints (I'm a member of the 12 Club).

That's pretty awesome looking... I'm not much of a white shirt wearing person, but the design is killer... work up some sort of negative and I'll buy it! :)

I wondered about that. Of course, a dark shirt means I can't use UV inks. Alas, I'm more interested in creating a design people would wear :-)

I can't wait to buy this one! Even if it is white (it won't stay that way for long around me).

I like it a lot, it is very rock star! I would certainly buy it!

If it were black, could you use glow in the dark paints instead? That might look cool, too. Either way, I like the flow of the design.

Pretty sweet design. I like the little threads of red in it. Overall it reminds me of the Body's exhibit a little. As for the black or white, I tend to wear both so neither would sway my opinion. I do however like the idea of black with glow in the dark inks.

I'll create a negative and see how you like that. Glow-in-the-dark bones should look good on a dark shirt.

This one is on black - a negative of my original design. Per the comments, glow-in-the-dark bones!

I hadn't thought much about the title, but how about: "Tribal to the Bone"

Never been a big fan of this art subject matter;

a humans insides printed on a T, with all due respect, no thank you

I like bones.

certainly better than the first version. I think this is the first time I've seen anyone do an art-deco-ish styling of a ribcage, very nice. I know a few former goths who would probably buy this.

I personally liked the white more :) reminded me of a Rorschach inkblot

Both are TRUELY mind blowing I love the graphics and for some reason it reminds me of an american chopper XD I just don't like how it stops flat at the bottom maybe make it end with a sharp vertibre.



Crit mine plz "catile"

this is much better.

please recipecate: gender troublw

I really like the black one, i think the white one could work if the gray and red objects were a darker shade. They're to light, you almost lose them against the white. The design kinda reminds me of some of TOOL's (the band) artwork. Really cool, i think its ready to submit.



Comment on mine if you have time:

http://www.threadless.com/critique/25631/Australian_Skeletons

v3 coming shortly - I went ahead and added the "back" of the shirt, though I'm still a little uncertain on Threadless's rules on this. The glow-in-the-dark print would make you a shining beacon in any party!

Here's what I originally wanted to see - front and back. The lightest parts are intended to be glow-in-the-dark, so you should be a shining beacon at any party! If everything appears okay, I anticipate submitting this one...wish me luck!

i really love this. its has an interesting male/female quality going on in the lines and it is very elegant. is this almost a kind of take on pinstripes?

It is reminiscent of formal attire, isn't it? Ha! I love it - maybe you'll inspire something new out of me.

I think its ready to submit, really nice. The only thing that bothers me are the shoulder blades on the back are too bold. They lose the airy, light feeling that the rest of the design has, but thats just a minor thing. Good luck!



Thanks for the comment on my design.

Great linework! but i would change the colours 2 something similar to the first one... with this colour scheme it just dosnt feel like something threadless would print. play around with it!

It's real, folks. Help a brother out:

I didn't realize it was going to take a week to get submitted. At any rate, it's up now! Go vote!

Thanx for the critique of mine. I'll work on it.

This one is really cool.

I just think it needs a little 'something' to make it stand out from the rest of the bone t shirts.

Great graphic tho!!

i like the design but i think the whole anatomy thing has been done to death, literally



good luck though





http://www.threadless.com/critique/47145/sleazy_pop#lastcomment



thanks, Luke