I don't know.

I don't think you need the numbers, the order is pretty obvious. I love the muscle-y guy!

howzat

wait a minute....

I like what you did in the second version. The first was alright but def. not as detailed. Also the composition comes together better and easily makes more sense in V2. If only all critiques progressed this well.

People seem to be saying it needs work.

What improvements are needed?

Thats the way this critique forum works... Hanent you noticed?

I don't think it needs any improvement. I'd buy it.

arms in the first frame are so much bigger than arms in the last frame. Love the muscley guy though.

just the last guy central and big up on front would be cool