I think u could do more detail in the plant.



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I think u can do more with the glow in the dark, more details, maybe make it a little more evil-looking... And maybe its better if u make the "carnivorous" part also glow in the dark so it just says "plant" in the light.



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increased detail on the plant and pot ;)



also took suggestion of LonePhlox to make the word carnivorous only visible at night ;D



gonna make it more evil in the dark in the next version ;D

The open mouth looks wierd, You need to rework that.



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The Tin Man's Broken Heart

hey that's an AWESOME design! i love the glow in the dark effect! =]

Looks really good. I like this one a lot but I think you should work on his eyes some more. Give them some more detail and make them look kinda mad or something. Maybe some slanted eyebrows to make it look like he's really ticked or something. If you did that I would so buy this shirt. It looks really cool.



Could you give me a hand? Thanks!

Puzzled

P.S. I just had an idea. Try this and see if you like it or not - give him some roots creeping over the edge of the pot and make them look like claws or long fingers or something. Just a thought.

Sorry... one more thing. I think you should try it without the thought bubble. I think it would look cooler without it.

Nix the speech bubble. Other than that, groovy.



Just to let you know Black People Love Me

Cool idea!

I would suggest that the eyes and mouth would be all only visible in the dark, so in the light it will look more regular plant.

Also I think the plant itself needs some more work, maybe add some leavs or something...



Good luck!

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