I like this alright, but I don't like her legs..it looks like you were trying to go for something more feminine but her body looks too masculine and stiff, especially around the shoulders and arms. I love the way you drew her outfit and her face is awesome though.
Very cool, love the composition, but I do agree her legs are odd. They look very bow-legged, and like her hips just keep curving outward instead of coming back in. Have a girl stand that way for you, and you'll see how unnatural it looks.. just bring the curves in a bit and the legs closer together. LOVE the design overall.
This one is one of my favorite designs! Its simple but different and overall amazing! Maybe mess with the color of the background a bit (my personal favorite is a darker red on the brown, but that might look too much like blood) but it does work right now so maybe don't bother ^_^
ROCK ON DUDE!
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