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i think the curly makes it cheesy...cuz steam is so....cheesy. I guess what makes this picture is the hand so like just stress it more -- enlarge, make it longer, bleh
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Your style is perfectly suited for t-shirts. Maybe switch the placement to center, but either way $5.
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Thanks for the comments so far! I kinda like the steam curls personally, but it would be pretty easy just to chop those out.
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just being pedantic, but shouldn't the shower curtain sit inside the bath. Don't want the rocker to slip and injure him/herself when they get out!
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Not to sound lame or anything, but the spiked bracelet.. eh.
It lowers the quality a bit, but I understand you are going for a certain theme. |
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Hmm... It kind of looks like he's excited to be taking a shower and throwing up the horns because of that. I don't think I'd get it if I didn't know the context. :\
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Who doesn't get excited to take a shower?
But anyway, I figured the studded leather bracelet and the musical note that he's yelling would be enough to get the point across. |
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Oh bosh. The context is obvious! Who doesn't sing in the shower?
I want this shirt to wear while playing Guitar Hero II. ;) |
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Also think you can have a little bit more going on in the shirt. Maybe like a guitar poking out the sides, mayhaps?
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I agree, an unfair score! I liked it. I think the placement is perfect as well.
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