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Oct 19 '07
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kritch

About my design

by kritch
Hello,

I based this design on some Cardboard Animals I made, which you can see Here

if you want.







And a larger version of the design isHere



Hope you like it.
fraid
fraid on Oct 19 '07
I really like it!



Something kinda seems a little awkward about the sun (maybe that the lining on the clouds is brighter than the actual sun), but at the same time I really like the contrast between the background and the figures. A brighter sun would be too bold anyway.



$5



By the way, those links are both just linking to this page for me..
annaleah
annaleah on Oct 19 '07
$4, I'm not sure why you've got "this way up" on the Rhino,but I think it'd be better without, also the tree's shadow looks a bit ... boxy .. with the sun so low shouldn't it be a bit elongated? If it was, or showed some hint of terrain it's cast over, it'd be 5. And if it was on a diff colour shirt, I'd buy it.
annaleah
annaleah on Oct 19 '07
Oh yeah, and the links don't work
Bio-bot 9000
Bio-bot 9000 on Oct 20 '07
I really like this, but think the text on the Rhino should go. (besides, isn't it usually "This End Up" or This Side Up" on cardboard boxes?)



I hope Threadless chooses this and puts it on some cool colored shirts.
valerieleaf
valerieleaf on Oct 20 '07
perhaps colours could be in brighter shades?

a little bit too dull for me .



but love th idea (:
kritch
kritch on Oct 20 '07
Thanks everyone,



You're right, the links don't work, hopefully these ones do:





Cardboard Animals



larger version of the Design





kritch
kritch on Oct 20 '07
Yet again those don't work



these ones do:



Cardboard Animals



Cardboard Animals
fireandiice15
fireandiice15 on Oct 20 '07
i really like it

but maybe on a different color?
chris_hill
chris_hill on Oct 20 '07
Awesome cardboard animals! (both shirt and on your site)
kenchikugishi
kenchikugishi on Oct 21 '07
Very nice design. Love the colors too
PassionFruit
PassionFruit on Oct 21 '07
kinda reminds me of the winner giraph paper...

nice though
PauloAccioly.
PauloAccioly. on Oct 21 '07
iloved5$$
nikolina100
nikolina100 on Oct 21 '07
cool!
clairey poppins
clairey poppins on Oct 22 '07
fabulous!
.lol.E
.lol.E on Oct 22 '07
nice shading!!! 5$ :D
benjamingeorge
benjamingeorge on Oct 22 '07
i think the darkness of khaki brings the shirt down

printed on natural possibly?
Tee-licious
Tee-licious on Oct 22 '07
love the design but not the halftone.
evilFe
evilFe on Oct 22 '07
loved! 5$
clst
clst on Oct 23 '07
I like it so much!
Posada
Posada on Oct 23 '07
nice
sannpet
sannpet on Oct 24 '07
Shadow could be darker. But good work.
axe_battler
axe_battler on Oct 24 '07
cool design, i'd rather have different placement though.
thadawan
thadawan on Oct 24 '07
$5, awesome shirt!
Nintend0-duck-hunt
Nintend0-duck-hunt on Oct 24 '07
I love love love this.
kritch
kritch on Oct 25 '07
Thanks for the comments everyone, maybe if it gets picked threadless will let me do some different colour options
MooseDinner
MooseDinner on Oct 25 '07
I like the cardboard cutout idea, but I think this could use some work. The colors of the sunset could use some tweaking, and I think you need something more than just cardboard to get people to want this. You could do a bunch of different animals for instance. Or some interesting twist or joke or something.
PonderThis
PonderThis on Oct 25 '07
I would lose the sun and horizon. The animals and tree stand alone great by themselves. Or find a way to "cardboardize" the background landscape. Also, I agree with the earlier comments about elongating the shadow a bit to make it more realistic, and about losing the "This Way Up" on the Rhino. The cardboard message will still get across without that text.



Great work! 4.
kritch
kritch on Oct 26 '07
thanks for voting everyone
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