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The hyphen kills the flow a bit ofr me, but love the literal play on type you created here as well as the graphics.
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I like the concept but can't overlook the one-syllable word being hyphenated. Also it would be great if the blocks of type actually looked three-dimensional - they're very 2D!
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See my comment above Cassienova...
Man, I really didn't think the 'mo-ve' would cause so much bother |
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You should soooooo do both the forward and backwards versions, and put one on the back and one of the front!
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for me the brilliance was in the fact that the word "Move" was cut in half and returned to the next line. I agree with the front/back thing too.
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the design is awesome, but i wouldve loved it even more if it was set in helvetica... oh and it should be spelled backwards too since the type itself is the negative :-P
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