Raining Men
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2320 days ago
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Jan 13 '06
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48 comments
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2.25 from 2,408 votes
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the lines are unnecessary in my opinion. quite clean for a first submission, which is a good thing. probably the hallelujah should go out too. it's making everything a little too christ when just writing there as a text. the leg of the figure on the bottom left and in the middle ( guess there are clones) looks very out of portions. nice idea, the siluets could be done better like I said. like maybe addition of some ties and man suitcase holding or a guitar player even haha * good luck and welcome to threadless
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Yeah, I don't think you need the strings.
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and maybe place the design on a top corner of the shirt
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no strings and we're in business
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agreed. with the lines, they look a bit more like puppets. placement might look better on the top of the shirt, rather than the bottom. keep it to the side like you have it, though.
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legs need serious adjusting and get rid of the lines then I'd buy it. Like the idea of giving them little identities like with the suitcase/tie/guitar thing. As it is 3, potential to be a 5.
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No lines and less copy/paste.
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FUNNY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! its really good.
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no strings but its really cute! i would buy it...
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Classic Weather Girls
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i can't find the link, but there's another tshirt just like this, it's exact to the other.. if i could draw...............
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Yeah, lose the strings. I didn't pick up on the joke at first.
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It's rainin' men!! I think this is a great design! The only problem would probably be the placement. Other than that, it's excellent! 5 !
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don't needthe strings $4
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No strings equals a five! But I'll give you a five anyway, if it gets printed you'll most likely lose the strings.
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I don't think the line should disappear completely. I think it should be a dotted line because if you get rid of the lines completely then it just looks like they hit a trampoline. I think a dotted line should get the point across that they are falling more clearly. Nice design 5!
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I agree, I hatemydent, the design is lovely and the dotted lines would make it perfect. You know it all!
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Yup! Top corner without the lines and I would have it be a FIVE AND BUY in a second
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same, no strings five and buy.
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pretty. id buy it. but it shouldnt say hallelujah =/
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Top corner.
Dotted lines. Light blue background. Absolute love. |
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i like the strings.
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I like the strings, but the point can be made without them with more clarity. And if you insisst on saying "hallelujah" it'd be better if probably the words where shaped as the cloud in which the men are falling from. And it'd be better in the upper right corner.or something that's higher at least. I like it overall though
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ahaha...
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ha...I like it lots. Get rid of the strongs and I'd buy it. 5.
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get rid of the srings. maybe dotted lines. and i completely love it. 5$
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I actually LOL'd.
I waaant this. :) |
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i like the design, but i don't get it.
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it looks like a bunsh of marionets. Loose the strings and all will be swell. I like the idea tho.
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lose the strings and i am there.....maybe you can put raindrops around them, or just the men.
good idea anyways |
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i like the lines a lot....keep them!
it took me a long second to figure this one out haha...but now i get it and i love it! great idea. 4. PS- to those who dont get it. "its RAININ MEN, halleujah!" (the song...remember?) |
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omg thats fucking funny!!!!
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i really like it; it's a great play on the song and the hallelujah fits because of the song. dotted lines would be best, probably, they do look like puppets right now.
its an awesome first submission! |
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Love the song reference. Well done first submission. My suggestions are:
- better cloud design - fewer men - men that don't look like they're doing a Mission Impossible from the cloud - text unnecessary I'm gonna go out, I'm gonna get myself absolutely soaking wet. |
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i think this a great shirt
my suggestions: - no lines! - move the placement to the top of the shirt and have them scattered farther down the shirt - perhaps have a silhouette of a woman with an umbrella, thinking or saying the hallelujah? or remove it because it is pretty clear it's from the song. when it's by the cloud it does seem too religiousy... i'd wear it :D 4 now...$5 if you lose the strings! |
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Raining men? You've alienated straight men! I don't like to have to play the gender card but I'd rather it be raining women - especially if they wern't clones, didn't have strings attached, and wern't left to splatter on the ground... or maybe they're landing on my crotch... the design isn't clear on this point.
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When I first saw this I thought is was some weird Christian thing of going up in the Rapture (like on 6 feet under).
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I really like this. It immediately reminded me of that song...I can't think of the name right now, but it's obvious that you meant for it to be like that. I think it'd be great with dotted lines...or without the strings, too. I think the "hallelujah" should stay, it fits with the whole song reference. 4
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Brilliant idea!!!!
Just a few changes I would make: Lose the lines, lose the text and give each man his own character (apparently they have them in real life!) With adjustments it is a gold star from me. Nice work! $5 |
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that bitch needs to go to the center of the shirt and no lines other than that it's so fucking hilarious. 5 bucks
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Lose the lines. because it makes the men look like puppets. And the Hallelujah should probably go too. Maybe a few raindrops to show directionality?
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this would be really cool if you could do a raining women for the guys, but then you lose the allusion, and the hallulujah just wouldn't make sense.
i agree on the less copy and paste. come'on, it's one shirt go ahead and take the time to do the little guys indivividually. top placement would be better. this is advice is all because i really like the idea and design. resub. |
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no strings, but clever
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i think this is cool .
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i'd like it with a dotted line and at the top of the shirt
cool idea, great for a first sub like it on white 5 |
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First submission, comments appreciated.